Night's Tenor

March 7, 08
Four point diamond star
Glitterin' like proud jewel
On Enchantress Night's dress

Night covers her naked void
With the songs woven from
Midnight lover's deep words
-Sense Naye to one

Hypnotizing dancing colours
Of deep auras we admire
Encircling Ancient Rune named Moon

It's the ambiguous wolves' audience
-Sense Naye to one
The patterned cycle ever ending
Wave by wave to frothy reef

Stars with spilled 'tales' flying
Ends catch our awe and wishes
Love the foreboding end told

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Dips his paint brushes in kerosene
Paint his glorious Night's canvas
God's stars have bloody 'tales'
-Sense Naye to one

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(Sense Naye to one=doesn't make sense to anyone)

Description:
The main idea was wishing upon stars, we wish upon stars when we cannot even say we all agree on how they came to be, or all about them. Yet we place so much trust in their patterns around the "Ancient Rune" (the moon) and for wishes. Why isn't that trust so freely given to people anymore? And when the stars change (as people do) we still trust the stars...but, aye, not the people? I'm getting ahead of myself. You may think more on this at your own time.

The first stanza speaks of a diamond which represents the star, and the "enchantress" is "Night" (obviously I personified it)
The second is talking about Night (again personified) and how she is dressed in deep dark colours (black for the most part as we know) and deep is how we would imagine lovers words, no? So that is where that comes in.
The third is talking about the changing stars, I use the words "hypnotizing dancing" to show the danger of their change...We, as humans, often think of being hypnotized a scary event-to not be in control-which, of course, is right. We cannot control everything-People...or Stars.
The fourth is more on the pattern, but also includes the moon-I did this mostly because I didn't want to leave out any detail of night-but as well as I quite liked the way to describe the moon as "wolves' audience" and the line, "Wave by wave to frothy reef" I found fitting.
The fifth talks about the shooting stars-finally on the theme, of wishing upon stars-for we wish upon the shooting stars, no? I changed the "tail" to be "tale" because if we wish upon them, whether it came true or not is an own Tale...But (since I am non believer in that sort) I mentioned the "foreboding end" and sarcastic "love" for it.
The last stanza was merely pointing out that we don't know how they came, "god" or science or whatever else.The repetitive was to drive the point that we do not know.And make you question/think